Could anyone offer me some CV feedback, please?

Jack over 4 years ago

Would this be the right forum to post a CV (to have some feedback on it) or should I post the CV in the 'careers clinic' instead.

Sorry for asking, but am not sure which one would be best (it is about tailoring my CV to HR roles specifically).

Jack

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Ruth over 4 years ago

Hi Jack, not sure if you received any advice on your CV but I just had a quick read through and my thoughts are that you should focus on positives in your summary. Rather than start a sentence with "Although I am not currently working in HR, " I would suggest removing this completely and focusing on the fact you have maintained CIPD membership! As you don't yet have any HR experience you could mention why you want to work in HR. For your Key Skills think about re-ordering them to put relevant skills at the top. Hope this helps a little.
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Annabel over 4 years ago in reply to Ruth

Hi Jack, I agree with Ruth. Highlight the transferable skills which would be of use in HR. To me, I'd be confused by your CV as to whether you want to work in HR or be a photographer. If it's HR, maybe take the photography skills lower down the list.
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Annabel over 4 years ago in reply to Ruth

Hi Jack, I agree with Ruth. Highlight the transferable skills which would be of use in HR. To me, I'd be confused by your CV as to whether you want to work in HR or be a photographer. If it's HR, maybe take the photography skills lower down the list.
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